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Friday, 20 December 2019

My poem

As soon as I saw the moon up close I would have felt over the moon to be the first man to step on the  moons surface. When I took the first step it felt like a huge trampoline with volcanoes every where.Image result for moon

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  1. Kia ora Arman

    Well done for participating in this years' SLJ programme, "Changemakers: People who have changed the world" - thanks for your response to activity 2: One Small Step for Man.

    I really enjoy how you used the expression, "over the moon" in your poem. The way that you describe the moon as huge, trampoline like with volcanoes everywhere makes me envision the moon really well. Thanks for that :)

    Do you know how to attribute images? Will you be able to tell us where you found this image of the moon?

    Looking forward to your response!

    Ngā mihi,
    Jordan

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